Peer Evalution 1

 
    I am going to write about Merve Arslantaş's Reflection Task 2a. The topic of the Merve's writing is health and fast food. She tries to explain the role of fast food in our lives. She does not say that you must not eat any type of the fast food. She says that people don't have time to eat home made food. However they should try to eat salads. She doesn't talk about only problems she also  gives possible solution options. She used correct grammar terms, and her sentences are easy to understand. Her writing is informative and reflects the situation of the world.